This is my very first chapter , a lot of grammar mistake, weird action sequence, ugly intro, you name it... everything are there, i hope you didn't have a hard time reading it :)
Please if you already have read the chapter, comment on how ugly it is, if possible add suggestions :) or grammar corrections. I will try my best to write a superb fiction, a story you never read before and will never read again! (<--what the heck?) If you have not read it, please read Match Made in Heaven
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If you only search for perfection in life, you may end up losing something more important than what you end up finding
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very interesting story (it's just my type of fav story)! can hardly wait for the next chapter.. is it in progress now? =D
Thank you.... for the comment *hugs*
I still stuck at page 7 lol. But i promise buy this week it will be finish :)
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